Thursday, April 25, 2013

Topics...


Tonight we went over our final topics, hopefully students will email me their essays, so I may edit and give some advice.  

I handed out three topics, and they were to practice on all three, then when the day of the final comes, two of those three topics are going to be on the final exam.  They must choose one of the two to write about.  I do not know which two are going to be there, but the students must choose only one to write about.  
Hopefully they have practiced on all three topics, and the one they are more comfortable with is the one that is going to be on the exam that day.  GOOD LUCK!
















Images taken from: http://www.publicspeakingtip.org/public-speaking/public_speaking_topics.php, http://www.computersciencetutorials.com/tutorials/2012/08/20/topics/

Tuesday, April 23, 2013

Practice Essay...



Tonight we had our practice essay.  I asked the students to choose one of the following topics: 


1.  Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: People are never satisfied with what they have; they always want something more or something different.  Use specific reasons to support your answer. 
2.  Many people believe television violence has a negative effect on society because it promotes violence.  Do you agree or disagree?  Use specific reasons and examples to support your response. 
3.  It is sometimes said that lending money to a friend can harm or damage the friendship.  Do you agree?  Why or why not?  Use specific reasons and examples to explain your answer. 

Briefly plan your essay then write a complete draft using facts, details, personal observation, and/or examples as appropriate to support your ideas.  When you have finished, proofread and edit your work. 


Images taken from: http://activemultimedia.co.uk/, http://www.possibilityu.com/college-application-essay-advice-choosing-topic

Thursday, April 18, 2013

Personality Trait...

Focused Free-Writing: 

If you had to name the one personality trait that you have tried the hardest to change in yourself, what would you say?  Explain.  

Many times, people have chose the non-aggressive attitude towards their education,  they would want to be more aggressive when it comes to pursuing their education.  Call it laziness, they do not have the stamina, but students genuinely care about their learning.  I honestly think that students whom are hardworking deserve to be rewarded.


Tonight I went over the scoring of an essay.  The P 3 2 1, which students need to score, the P=Pass.  The Pass paper shows that the writer is confident with his/her writing skill.  The essay has one clear, well-focused topic; the main ideas are well supported by vivid and accurate details.  The essay has an inviting and appropriate introduction, followed by relevant information presented in a logical order.  Furthermore, the essay closes with a strong and convincing conclusion.  The author's purpose of writing is very clear and there is strong evidence of attention to audience.  The author uses sophisticated vocabulary and phrases; sentences are well constructed and vary in structure and length with minimal grammatical and mechanical errors. 

I constantly reminded my students how their writing needs to be perfect, when they choose their topic to write about.  I also reminded them that throughout the whole semester we went over how to be a better writer, and they should take into mind how they are to tackle this final essay.

Hopefully, it works, and I will see the improvement in their writing.  We'll see...










Image taken from: http://alleydog.com/topics/personality.php#.UW_Sv9eVrzx

Tuesday, April 16, 2013

Smart...

Focused Free-Writing: 

If you had to name the smartest person you have ever met, who would it be?  Explain.  

 I believe all students are smart, at this level, they are smart enough to get themselves to school, in class.  So I should give them that much credit.  It is very hard in today's society to go to school, with so many distractions, it is easy for one to do other things than to seek higher education. 







Today Paper # 4 is due.  I would need all the drafts from the groups.  Now it is time to prepare for finals.  



Image taken from: http://dozerstrength.com/train-smart-not-hard/ 

Thursday, April 11, 2013

First Impressions...

Focused Free-writing: 

If you had to name the person who turned out to be furthest from your first impression of them, who would it be?  Explain.  

Interesting...they say first impressions are lasting impressions.  I know that the quiet people, when I first meet them, and their attitude, or mannerisms do not jive when they start being loud and obnoxious, that is the ones I would pick.   They didn't strike me as the type to be the way they were. 








Today is the last day the students have to work in their writing groups.  Then next week, Tuesday their paper is due.  They need to turn in everything, the drafts they worked on.

Image taken from: http://www.minotcru.com/?p=677

Tuesday, April 9, 2013

Be Nice...

Focused Free-writing: 

If in retrospect, you could have been nicer to one person, who would you pick?  Explain.  

I find this topic to be interesting, many times people/students will choose someone they've wronged.  I wonder if it has something to do with guilt or even regret.  The word retrospect means too look back.  So I guess, a response with having guilt of something or someone wronged would come into play at this point.  Can't wait to read what my students have to say about this topic.






Today, my student continued to work in their writing groups.  I hope they get half way done with at least two of their group members. 





Images taken from: http://www.shawnkinley.com/2010/09/02/be-nice/

Thursday, April 4, 2013

Gullible...

Focused Free-writing: 

If you had to name the most gullible person you know who is it?  Explain.  
 






Tonight we went over the Proofreader's Challenge.  The hand out I gave last class was what we went over, and we correct most of the errors that were throughout the essay.  Afterwards, the students began working in their group, with their essays. 






Image taken from: http://arcticcompass.blogspot.com/2011/05/gullible-mind-explained-by-mike-adams.html

Tuesday, April 2, 2013

Courage...

Focused Free-writing: 

If you suddenly found the courage to do one thing you have always been afraid of doing, what would it be?  Explain.  












Today we went over Writing Group Guidelines.  I explained to the student they must work in groups of three or maybe four, and how they are going to be editing each other's papers.  There were a couple of quick notes to take about working in groups. 

Writing Group Guidelines: 
THE WRITER:
1.  Come with a substantial piece of writing.  Provide copies for each group member.
2.  Read your writing out loud.  Speak clearly, confidently.  Introduce your writing.  (Don't say too much, let your writing do the talking.)
3.  Listen to your group's comments.  Ask questions if you do not understand. 
4.  Collect all your copies, ensure your group has signed the copy.  Then you are off to correct your paper with the advice your group

THE LISTENER:
1.  Follow along as your group member is reading his/her paper. 
2.  Make comments/corrections on the copy provided.  Be Positive!  Remember to use editing marks. 
3.  Write down any questions you may have for the reader/writer. 
4.  Be prepared to answer questions the reader/writer may have. 


After we went over the Writing Group Guidelines we discussed some conferencing tips.  I provided hand outs for the students to go over, and then we did some proof reading.  I provided the students with two essays they needed to read and correct, using editing marks. 

The students were asked to choose their group members.  They had to inform me who they were going to be working with before they left for the evening. 








Image Taken from: http://myquoteshome.com/courage-is-the-last-way-to-take-all-kinds-of-risks/

Thursday, March 21, 2013

A Friend...

Focused Free-writing: 

If you could change places with any of your friends, who would you choose to be?  Explain.  

I think many of us would want to change places with someone whom is smarter, successful, and has a plan.  Students of describe people they know, to be more successful as they are currently, so they may have all the things that particular person has.  It is interesting to see how students admire others especially when they are successful in life.  Only if...






Today, paper # 3 is due...so students are going to be busy turning it in before they go on break.




Image taken from: http://www.essex1.com/pages/paul/bible3.html 

Tuesday, March 19, 2013

A Typical Day...

Focused Free-writing: 

If you could change one thing about your typical day, what would it be?  Explain.  

Interesting, some students wrote that they would want to sleep in, not be so lazy during the day.  I believe that to be true, laziness could get the best of someone.  At that time, what would be the perfect solution? 


Today, I finally gave back all my students essays.  Essay number two, and now they are supposedly working on essay number three to be turned in as final on Thursday. 

Thursday, March 14, 2013

Smile...

Focused Free-writing: 

If you were to pick the one thing that always makes you smile, what would it be?  Explain. 

Tuesday, March 12, 2013

Charming...

Focused Free-writing: 

If you had to choose the single most charming person you have ever met, who would win? Explain.  
 

Thursday, March 7, 2013

Ring the Bells...

Focused Free-writing: 

If you were to have bells ring out loud automatically (for all to hear) every time you did a certain thing, what would it be?  Explain.  

Many times I feel as though I would want bells to ring out every time I've done something good.  I have had students discuss this topic, in this regards doing good in their lives.  It doesn't necessarily say they are bad people constantly doing bad things but they would just want to finally be recognized for their good deeds.


Today we went over Dialogue.  I find it very fun to use dialogue, in fact I highly encourage my students to use dialogue, it brings writing to life. 

Tuesday, March 5, 2013

Read my thoughts...

Focused Free-writing: 

If there were to be someone among those you know, whom could read all your thoughts who would it be?  Explain you choice.  

Many students often lead off with the argument, that the wouldn't want anyone to read their thoughts, it would be scary.  


We went over narrative writing today.  I believe narrative writing is the most interesting type of writing.  I find narratives to be very fun to read, call me nosy, or what but I love narratives.

Thursday, February 28, 2013

Dogs, a man's best friend...

Focused Free-writing: 

If you were to choose the breed you would be if you were a dog, which type would best suit you?  Explain.  

Interesting how I came up with this topic, when I first started teaching, and one of my students whom was quiet and seemed as though he never talked, or showed emotion was absent from class.  Then one of his classmates, when I asked where he was, said "He's absent."  Then she went on to describe how he reminds her of a pitbull.  Because of his stern look and behavior.  This is a fun topic to read about, my students hopefully, will match their personality to the dog they've chosen.

Today Paper # 2 is due.  Many but not all my students have been conferencing with me, and I have seen great improvement in their writing.  It is very nice to see their progression as writers.  







Image taken from: http://visual.merriam-webster.com/animal-kingdom/carnivorous-mammals/dog-breeds_1.php 

Tuesday, February 26, 2013

Get up and do something...

Focused Free-writing: 

If you could make anyone in the world do something each day, who would it be, and what would you have them do?  Explain. 

Similar to my hypnotizing topic, but very different.  If you could make someone do something each day, not necessarily for a moment, who would it be and what would you have them do?  When I was teaching with the Adult High School Program, many of my students would choose their spouse or their children, they would have them do all the house chores, and do what a particular busy spouse would do.  They would often describe how lazy their children or spouse would be, after having a long day at work or school.

Today I conferenced with a few students, not all, just a few.  Hopefully, they come up to me with their writing at least once, so they can improve as writers.

 

Thursday, February 21, 2013

Magic...

Focused Free-writing: 

If you had the gift of magic for one day, what would you do?  Explain. 
Tonight's topic, it feels like magic.  In Micronesia, magic takes on a different meaning, different from the modern western idea of magic.  The modern western belief or view of magic is considered as making objects suddenly appear from no where.  Magic is almost considered to be some what of a miracle, or some major life-changing event happening for no apparent reason, an intervention just coming out of no where.  But in Micronesia, magic takes on a more traditional means and is interpreted as making someone do something they may not necessarily want, the outcome of events--result is the desire of the person whom places the magic spell.  Having control over someone, is the aim.  We consider magic to be powers people possess, as an ability to have someone under our control.    


I wonder what my students' responses will be towards this topic.  I know some may consider magic to be something taboo, but I hope their imaginations soar with this topic.  It seems like a fun topic to have to read. 








Image Taken From: http://www.dinodigusa.com/magic.html

Tuesday, February 19, 2013

Making a Decision...

Focused Free-writing: 




If you had to pick one experience or situation when you were the most decisive, which would it be? 

Many times, the response would be, the decision to come to school.  The students have the choice after high school whether or not to attend college.  Many students, of course the ones whom are older, regret not going to school immediately after they have graduated from high school.  They often talk about how their career could have been a more stable one, and how they will have been making so much money at this point.  At times, I struggle with being able to make a decision, some times it may come down to flipping a coin or saying eenie-meenie-minee-mooe.  Making a decision now, is crucial, decision making is something that should be given great thought, because there may be adverse or favorable effects.

Later, we went over Description how it is important in writing.  I think of all the genres of writing, description is the most important.  Descriptive writing brings things to life.  A good description allows readers to visualize a scene, a person, a room, or even an object.  In essay writing, a good description can add depth and understanding to the work.

All writers use descriptive writing at one time or another.  Fiction writers depend heavily upon descriptive writing when describing characters or places in a story.  Descriptive writing is also necessary when defining a term or giving instructions.    
























Images taken from: http://militaryrealestatevoice.com/2008/08/

Thursday, February 14, 2013

Valentine's Day...


Focused Free-writing: 


Describe your perfect date.  

Okay, so I gave in, and decided to have my students write about a perfect date. This type of topic is what I usually give at the beginning of the semester, for my students to write/describe.  I gave in since today is Valentine's Day, to let my students write about their perfect date.  Many responses I get when the topic is on the board, initially, is "What if I've never been on a date?"  Then make it up!  Use your imagination, what would you perceive in your mind to be a perfect date.  What would you do on your date for it to be perfect.

Other times I explain to my students there are two angles you can consider.  One, could be a perfect, specific date you have experience already.  For example, February 10, 2007 was the date I proposed to my wife, being the perfect date etched in my mind.  Second, could be a romantic date, where you would go, to the beach side, to a fancy restaurant, having a wonderful meal.

I like to encourage my students to soar with this topic, and be as descriptive as possible.






Image taken from: http://entregaesubmissao.blogspot.com/2013/01/valentine-day-2013-wallpaper.html
  

Tuesday, February 12, 2013

Good Company...

Focused Free-writing: 

If you had to spend the rest of your life in the company of a single type of animal, which would you choose?  Explain.  

Many responses to this topic have been a parrot, dog, or cat.  Many choose these types of animals because they want company.  If for the rest of their lives they are in the company of this type of animal, then they would want some company.  I found it interesting, that some chose the parrot to have someone to talk to, a dog so they have an obedient companion.  Many times they have chosen their favorite animals, animals they completely adore, so it would be interesting to see what is the favorite of my students.  

Editing Marks

Tonight's lesson was on Editing Marks also known as Proof Reader's Marks, the marks I use to correct students' papers.  I explained how I mark where a capital letter should be, an insert, delete and so on.  I handed out a sheet to follow, and I also went over some editing marks not found on the sheet that I use, for example to put a word in italics, bold, and so on.  

Before our editing marks lesson, I went over a couple of things to avoid in formal essay writing.  Try not to use contractions, slang, vague words.  Hopefully, my students will start to avoid using those things when writing.  
Here are some editing marks I use 


Punctuation: The Traffic Signs of Writing


We also went over how punctuation marks are used in writing.  When I introduced punctuation marks I told the students imagine if the roads that we drive our cars on had no traffic signs or traffic lights.  People would be driving their cars everywhere, not knowing when to stop or where to go.  It would be very confusing.  Periods, commas, colons, and other punctuation marks operate like traffic signs and lights for readers.  They tell us when to stop, when to slow down, and when to keep going.  When writers use the correct punctuation, they are helping readers travel through their writing.

The period is like a stop sign.  It is placed at the end of a sentence, a complete thought.  The question a writer should ask is, "When do I need to stop?" To figure out where one sentence ends and another begins, look for the place where one idea or thought ends and a new one begins.  Often writers will have trouble with periods when they want to join more than one idea together.  One of the best ways to know when to put in a period is to reread the writing out loud.  If you need to stop and take a deep breath, then you know a period is needed.

The comma is thought of as a yield sign, telling the reader to slow down.  We can use a comma to join two complete ideas together, or several commas and a conjunction following the last when we are listing a series of items.  Like a period, the best way to find out where to put a comma is to reread the writing out loud.  Usually, when you have to gasp for a short breath, insert a comma.  But remember, don't over do it, sometimes a comma will occur only once in a sentences or not at all.  Conjunction words, like and, or, but do not need the comma, but it depends how we use the words in our writing.

The most common misused punctuation is the semi-colon.  If a student is unsure about a semi-colon, they should not be using it.  Many times when students use the semi-colon they are misusing this punctuation.  A semi-colon is a period and comma put together, so it is telling us, stop, but not completely, just enough to take a breath but not a deep long breath--move on, because there is a greater/complementing/shorter idea coming.  When a semi-colon is used in a sentence usually there are two ideas in the sentence, the first being the longest (largest) and the second just complementing it (shorter) so we would find the semi-colon right between the two ideas.  But I constantly reminded my students, when in doubt, leave it OUT!

We also went over other punctuation marks in English writing, opening up a whole new world for some, and others just a review of what they have already learned.  If used properly punctuation marks enhance the writing, making it easy to understand.







Images taken from: http://www.teacherweb.com/FL/ManateeElementary/CynthiaMiller/6-1-Editing-Marks.png, http://www.123rf.com/photo_9465383_chalkboard-showing-punctuation-marks-with-clipping-path-at-this-size.html, http://www3.canisius.edu/~grandem/animalshabitats/SOFTCHALKGOOD_print.html

Thursday, February 7, 2013

Growing Old

Focused Free-writing: 

     If you had to name the one thing that frightens you about growing old, what would it be? 

The question of the evening, many responses would probably include, I don't know.  I haven't read students' responses yet.  But in the past, I know that when I have discussed this topic, it would mostly revolve around having a mind that is all-together.  When I get older, I wouldn't want to lose my mind, because I would have lost all my memories, my whole life, contained, just gone.  That is the only thing I worry about, when I get older.  I want my mind to be sharp, so that I may communicate with others. 


Essay/Paper # 1 is due today...Students have submitted their papers.  And it is looking promising.  Although, I will still have some comments and edits for the students.  Writing is a never ending process. 














Images Taken From: http://it.pinellas.k12.fl.us/teachers3/wheatleyb/let.html, http://randumbuzz.com/category/quotes/growing-old-quotes/

Tuesday, February 5, 2013

Ambition

Focused Free-writing:

If you could be more ambitious in only one aspect of your life, what would it be?  Explain.  

Well, I definitely know my students will choose to be more ambitious towards their education.  Many of them mention how they would have taken high school more seriously, or how they would just go to school right when they graduated from high school and not look for a career.  But it depends, some people find that school is not for them.  However, I always encourage my students to pursue higher education, because in today's society, and education is the key to a successful career, and everyone wants a successful career. 
Now I'm really wondering if all my students have chosen that topic.  I've glanced over past topics students have written in this class, predicting, proposing what my students' responses would be and to my surprise, one of my students chose a response I've never heard of before.  His perspective caught me off guard, and I found it to be very interesting.  I've never thought of it that way.
Images taken from: http://blog.javier-carrete.com/2010/10/intelligence-without-ambition-is-bird.html, http://joshuatwe.blogspot.com/2012/12/what-is-your-ambition.html

Thursday, January 31, 2013

January's End...

Focused Free-writing: 

If you had the power to hypnotize anyone for a day, who would you pick and what would you have them do?  Explain.

     Many times when students write about this topic, it is dependent of what role they play, in their personal life.  If they are a wife, they would generally choose one of their family members, namely their husband.  If they were a mother as well, they would also choose their children.  They would have them do whatever they do on a daily basis, clean, cook, wash dishes.  They choose their children or spouse because they want them to know exactly how they feel when they do all the household chores.
     Other times students (especially college students) will choose a rich person.  They will choose that rich person and have them deposit all his/her money into their bank account, which is a very smart move.  Imagine, you have control over a person for one whole day, you control what they say, how they think, their actions.  Students have become very smart today, especially when money is something very important to that society.  Money, Money, Money...



     Today I held conferences for the students.  They came up to me with their writing.  Maybe I'll write more about how the conferencing went.





Image taken from: http://www.cartoonstock.com/directory/s/stage_show.asp, http://ninapaley.com/hots/archives/221 

Tuesday, January 29, 2013

The Fourth Day...

Focused Free-writing: 

     If you could determine the age at which you will die, but with no guarantees regarding health or money, how old would you like to be when you go?  Explain. 
  


The topic for this evening.  Usually, when students write about this topic, I have a couple of students that choose the same age.  Majority of my students choose the age of 88, or 92.  The two ages seem to be the most popular.  The main reason for choosing this age is that they want to see their children grow, and see their children's children.  We'll see what they have to say...


The Writing Process

Today we went over The Writing Process.  I went over the basic steps, finding an idea (pre-writing), drafting, self-editing, revising (re-writing), teacher-edit, and publishing. 

Step 1: Pre-writing THINK 
Step 2: Drafting WRITE
Step 3: Revising MAKE IT BETTER
Step 4: Proofreading MAKE IT CORRECT
Step 5 Publishing SHARE THE FINISHED PRODUCT

Many times, when we look at a book, we do not see the process the writer used to make the book possible.  What we see in print might have been rewritten many times.  The writing process is a process all writers use, most writers go back and forth through the major stages of writing, sometimes with many drafts to prove it.  I hope my students come away from the writing process with the idea, there is no ONE correct way to write.  We just need to get in there and start WRITING!

In the Pre-writing stage we plan what we are going to write.  We choose a topic, identify our audience and purpose, brainstorm ideas and organize information.  The Drafting stage we write our ideas in sentences and paragraphs.  Follow our pre-writing plan to write a first draft of our composition.  In the Revising stage we are looking at our writing with different eyes.  Hopefully at this point, we have taken a break from what we have written so far.  I suggest maybe a day, take a break, go for a walk, take a nap (remember I mentioned nap, don't fall asleep for seven hours, it doesn't constitute a nap).  This stage is the first part of editing our writing, we may work by ourselves or with a partner or a group.  Make changes that will improve our writing.  If early on in the semester, we are not comfortable sharing our writing with our peers, we don't need to share.  But towards mid-semester, we should be more or less comfortable with each other, and begin to share more freely.  The Proofreading stage we finish our editing by polishing our work.  Check for errors in grammar, spelling, capitalization, and punctuation.  We should as much as possible make a final copy of our composition, which will lead us to the next stage.  The Publishing stage, finally we choose a way to present our work to an audience.  Ways to publish include: reading our work aloud, sending it to the newspaper, posting it to a blog, putting it on Facebook or simply giving it to a friend to read.  (Yes, Facebook does count, there are sections there for notes, or even attaching messages, which are lengthy.)  Many times, when we reach the last stage in the writing process, after going through many drafts, of editing, revising, we would want to take pride in our work and PUBLISH!  I highly encourage my students to publish their work, especially when their writing is very effective.

I also handed out our writing folders today, and gave the students directions as to where/how (proper protocol) to submit their work.  They are always welcome to email me their drafts, and I will be more than willing to edit them outside of class.   Hopefully they take advantage of email. 



Images taken from: http://writing.pppst.com/writingprocess.html, 

Thursday, January 24, 2013

The Third Day....

Our Focused Free-writing topic: 

If you could go back in time and do one thing differently, what would it be?  Explain.   

     This focused free-write topic is usually a topic I enjoy reading.  I enjoy reading what my students have to say.  It is something to start reading about other people's lives.  I find it interesting, and for some reason it aids in getting to know the person more, to be more comfortable with them, and how they think.  As the students were writing thoughts of what they were writing around bounced around the walls of the classroom.  I saw many of them really concentrating on what they were writing about, and I urged them when they were finished with the activity to just try and write freely.
   
     Afterwards, we went over the three things to start thinking about before or when they begin writing.
  • Subject
  • Purpose 
  • Audience 
Then we went over the basic structure of a five paragraph essay.  Introduction, Body, Conclusion.  I also asked the students to write at least five topics they are thinking about writing about this semester.  They do not necessarily need to stick to that topic.  I can't wait to read what my students have to say.





Tuesday, January 22, 2013

The Second Day

Today we went over our class syllabus, I discussed everything in detail, from beginning to the ending of each class session.  Here is the syllabus I went over:




Guam Community College
English Department

Spring Syllabus 2013
EN100W-14, Fundamentals of English – Writing CRN-10286
INSTRUCTOR: Mr. Jose A. Cruz, Jr.
Meets: Tuesdays & Thursdays, 8:00pm-9:30pm Room C4
Contact #: 735-5579 (English Department)
Email: jose.cruz@guamcc.edu

Catalog Description:
EN100W:  Fundamentals of English/Writing

Students work toward improving their writing skills.  Instruction is individualized to meet each student’s level of ability.  EN100W focuses on writing as a process, conferencing with peers and the instructor, and using critical thinking skills to improve written work.

Students with a composition score below 4 from a prior EN100W course are required to retake EN100W until the required composition score of “Pass” is achieved.  Students may enroll in both EN100R and EN100W if they earn a score of 62-67 on the reading component of the COMPASS placement test.  Students are placed into EN100W if they received a grade of “P” in EN100R-Fund. of English/Reading, or are reading at the 9.0 or above grade level based on the Nelson-Denny reading test and currently enrolled in EN100R, or earn a score of 68-100 on the reading component, 0-100 on the writing component, and 0-5 on the essay component of the COMPASS placement test.

Student Learning Outcomes (SLOs):

Upon successful completion of this course, students will be able to:

            1.  Demonstrate improvement in their overall writing abilities.
            2.  Submit prewriting drafts, outlines, rough drafts, revisions, and final drafts as evidence
                 of using the writing process.
            3.  Utilize a word processing program to facilitate writing.

OBJECTIVES:
The student:
1.      Will engage in the writing process, develop strategies, ask relevant questions, react and enjoy the writing of others. 
2.      Assume the responsibility for their learning, and have input into the writing of others in a positive non-critical manner. 
3.      To participate in the full writing process and turn in writing pieces on time. 
4.      Become actively involved with their writing, reading, and become critical thinkers. 




PROCEDURES:
1.      Attendance is very important!  Students are required to sign in at the beginning of each class period on the Attendance Sheet provided.  Attendance and promptness are strongly encouraged. 
2.      Inform the instructor of absence and have a doctor’s excuse if it is more than two days.  Make-up work will be given upon the date of return, for excused absences.
3.      Late assignments will be accepted at the discretion of the Instructor. 
4.      Students are required to come to class prepared. 
5.       Each class session: 
a.       Begins with a 10-15 minutes “free writing” exercise.
b.      Class/group sharing 5 minutes.
c.       Mini-skill lesson 10-15 minutes.
d.      Writing
                                                                                      i.      Choosing topics/narrowing topic
                                                                                    ii.      Drafts/revision/editing/proofreading
e.       Instructor – Student conferencing.
f.       Student – Student conferencing.
6.      All hand-written work should be legible in print.  Use of slang or offensive language will not be tolerated. 
7.      Students must actively participate in class discussions, group activities, one oral presentation (Author’s Chair) and conferencing exercises.  We will share our methods of writing, problems encountered, and strategies or solutions that work for us.  Group share may begin or end each class session. 
8.      Academic Dishonesty/Plagiarism issues will result in a grade of F and referral to Student Services Office. 
9.      All final papers to be turned in are to be printed from a computer (double spaced).  Final Copy: Must have student’s name, course number, instructor’s name, date, semester, and paper number (Left margin).  All pages must have student’s last name and page number, in the upper right corner.
10.  Evacuation Procedures: Instructor will inform students of exit procedures. 

MATERIALS:
No textbook is required.  Students will be given a folder to be used as their “writing folder” which will remain in class.  All in-class work, drafts and copies of your final papers will be kept in your writing folder.  STUDENTS MUST BRI NG LOTS OF FILLER PAPER, BLUE OR BLACK INK PENS, AND A DICTIONARY/THESAURUS/SPELLER. Use black or blue ink pens, do not use metallic or gel ink pens; never write with a pencil.  Instructor will provide worksheets and other activities as needed.  Recommended resource: Pocket Keys for Writers by Ann Raimes (Available at GCC Bookstore). 

Accommodative Services-Located under Student Services (guamcc.edu website)

The Office of Accommodative Services provides assistance to individuals with disabilities seeking educational opportunities with Guam Community College.  Our office is committed to ensuring that students with disabilities are afforded an equal opportunity to access the educational programs and services that GCC has to offer.  As well as our commitment to providing reasonable accommodations, adequate to the needs of an individual’s disability within a classroom setting, while maintaining the level of academic standards required in all courses and programs at Guam Community College.  The office telephone number is (671) 735-5597.
Mission
Through its actions, the Office of Accommodative Services seeks to create a climate at Guam Community College where all students, regardless of accommodative needs, become increasingly active participants in their educational experience.
Services Provided
  1. Reasonable accommodations for the classroom and the campus, based on your disability.
  2. Auxiliary aids for students who are in need of a sign language interpreter, note taker, e-books, etc.
  3. Assistance with the registration process and other needs concerning enrollment and student issues

FERPA and Privacy:
Under FERPA (Family Educational Rights and Privacy Act), your educational records are confidential and protected. Under most circumstances, your records will not be released without your written and signed consent. However, some directory information may be released to third parties without your prior consent unless a written request to restrict this is on file. You can learn more about student rights to privacy at the GCC online college catalog in Appendix I (http://catalog.guamcc.edu <http://catalog.guamcc.edu> ), by visiting the U.S. Department of Education website, http://www2.ed.gov/policy/gen/guid/fpco/ferpa/index.html <http://www2.ed.gov/policy/gen/guid/fpco/ferpa/index.html> , or accessing the FERPA Group on MyGCC which is open to all users.
If you still have concerns, please the Registrar’s office at gcc.registrar@guamcc.edu <mailto:gcc.registrar@guamcc.edu>.

Evaluation:

In addition to meeting the course requirements, students must meet the following criteria to pass this course:

1.      Achieve a passing score of 70% or better on the Standard English Recognition Test.
2.      Score a “Pass” on the final composition exam.

The following is an explanation of final grades:

            P – Successful completion of course and exam requirements.
Z – Progressing satisfactorily but has not achieved required competency level.  Student must retake EN100W.
            F – Student did not meet the requirements of the course.

TENTATIVE SCHEDULE: ****Attend all classes as schedule is subject to change….
Week 1                                                                                          1/17-1/22                    
Introductions/purpose/procedures/writing survey/Introduction to Writer’s Workshop
Introduction of teacher, expectations of class, what we are going to be doing….beginning to ending of each class. 
Week 2                                                                                          1/24-1/29
Topics/Generating Strategies/Topic Chosen
Week 3                                                                                          1/31-2/5
Paper #1 Due: Feb. 5
Generating Strategies Continued
The Writing Process
Week 4                                                                                          2/7-2/12
Characteristics of Effective Writing/Punctuation Marks
Week 5                                                                                         2/12-2/14
Leads/Conclusions/Quotation Marks & Underlining                     
Week 6                                                                                          2/19-2/21
Paper #2 Due: Feb. 21
Editing/Model Writing
Week 7                                                                                          2/26-2/28
Commonly Confused words
Week 8                                                                                          3/5-3/7
Writing Partners Assigned
Group Editing
Week 9                                                                                          3/12-3/14
Paper #3 Due: Mar. 14
Presentation of favorite Writing Piece: Author’s Chair
Types of Paragraphs-Narrative
Week 10                                                                                        3/19-3/21
Types of Paragraphs-Illustration/Examples
Week 11                                                                                        4/2-4/4
Paper #4 Due: Apr. 4
Types of Paragraphs-Cause & Effect
Week 12                                                                                        4/9-4/11
Types of Paragraphs-Description/Definition
Week 13                                                                                        4/16-4/18
Final Paper due: Apr. 18       
Types of Paragraphs-Persuasion
Week 14                                                                                        4/23-4/25                    
Course Reflections/Writing Reflection Papers
Week 15                                                                                        4/30-5/2,7
Final Exams
Composition (5/2/13)
SERT (5/7/13)


****Syllabus is subject to change


Lengthy?  Not at all, I've read other syllabi, and they are more lengthy than what I have here.    The students that were absent last class, (on the first day), were tasked to write for me today, the remaining 30 minutes of class was reserved for them, to complete at least a paragraph of writing.  I wanted to see how they write, mainly just to get a feeling of all my students' writing.  Now I have to read six additional writing pieces, in addition to the twelve I got last class, totaling eighteen.  

Now it is time to read...student writing, hot off the press... 


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